Rough Draft

Today I submitted my rough draft. I think for a rough draft it's very well written although I think I did the citations wrong. I do need to figure out what I want to say for an introduction, but I have learned to do that last to know exactly what I'm introducing. Also, I need to include more of my personal feelings and opinions about the facts I have included in my paper. I am actually worried about going over the page limit though on this paper.